Curse

Tzu · Aug 23, 2008, 07:33 PM // 19:33

comic me and Zholn Cherub are working on, to keep our good memories from our GW characters when GW2 is released.

PROLOGUE page 1

CHAPTER 1: WANDERLUST page 1
CHAPTER 1: WANDERLUST page 2

Tatile · Aug 23, 2008, 08:16 PM // 20:16

Nice. I find the writing a tad predictable, but that's by no means a bad point for this, it just seems familiar.

A point though, some of background colouring makes parts of the text hard to read. This is annoying to fix, I know, I've tried it, but it's something you should probably keep an eye on.

All in all, me likes :3

Tzu · Aug 23, 2008, 08:51 PM // 20:51

XD lol, yes I know... I dislike the dialogue the way it is now, and the storyline might sound really predictable at this point, but I promise to surprise :3
I'm quite bad at prologues/build-ups, but this story seriously requires one.

I tried to make the writing as legible as possible, but if you have any kind of problem reading it, it means I'll have to be even warier of it. Thanks

Elder III · Aug 23, 2008, 08:52 PM // 20:52

looks cool to me - keep the good work coming!

Tatile · Aug 23, 2008, 08:53 PM // 20:53

Don't worry, as much of a story-teller as I like to think I am, I hate writing. Particularaly for comics, did that once, it was a nightmare.

Sin City Gamer · Aug 23, 2008, 10:19 PM // 22:19

I like the style its being presented in

Good work so far.

One point of constructive criticism though: The text can be hard to read at certain places. Maybe find a color that fits your theme other than the black and white you are currently using. A difficult task I would think, considering how good the black and white look though...

Tzu · Aug 24, 2008, 11:22 AM // 11:22

thanks everyone, I've tried to make the text easier to read this time; page 2 is now up.

Sin City Gamer · Aug 24, 2008, 09:28 PM // 21:28

Beautifully done

I love the new text style.

Smilin' Assassin · Aug 24, 2008, 11:35 PM // 23:35

beautiful, Tzu
lovely screenshotting/editing & text, and has an epic feel about it .. like it's gonna be one big project, wonderful to keep you busy in GW for just about ever, and plenty for us to look forwards to:}

Tender Wolf · Aug 25, 2008, 03:08 AM // 03:08

Very creative Tzu! Beautiful pictures and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. *adds this to newspaper so others can also enjoy it* Keep it up!

I may have to do this before long. haha

Hollow Gein · Sep 05, 2008, 05:52 AM // 05:52

This is quite good. You have established the hero, now for the villain. Mwa hahahaahha!!!.... Seriously, they have the best lines.

Calaval · Sep 05, 2008, 10:51 AM // 10:51

Great work! I'm looking forward to reading more!